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I Loved Him Like a Sister — Then I Let Him Go
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"I remember his small finger poking my cheek," I say first, because that memory never leaves me. "Do you remember, Keegan?"
Keegan Dillon blinks at the window and smiles like he always does — that shallow, honest curve by his mouth, the dimple that looks like a quiet secret. "You mean when you cried because I called you 'little fennel bean'?" he replies, voice soft as dust.
"I'm not a bean," I reply, and the line between us is both a joke and a map of every day we ever shared.
We have grown up in the same narrow town, walked the same lanes, climbed the same low wall draped in ivy. We have eaten the same winter oranges, argued over the same homework, and I have kept my distance from being the person the book said I would be — the villain, the thorn.
"Colette," he says, and the way he says my name sometimes feels like a promise and sometimes like a question. "Why are you staring at the bridge?"
I glance at the old bridge down the lane, then back at him. "Because you keep standing there with other people on it," I say. "Because you are wearing that yellow hoodie and the whole town lights up when you wear yellow."
He smiles, but someone else is on the bridge today. On the bridge, Keegan's arms hold a thin girl in white — Bethany Chavez — who looks small as a reed and fragile as spun glass. The two of them bend together in a way that makes a thousand tiny sharp things open inside me.
"You two are together," I say. "All the time. Is it always like this?"
Keegan looks down. "Not always," he says, and then, "But sometimes it's like this."
There is a book. The town whispers of it like a slow wind. I arrived here knowing lines of that book — names, scenes, the way fate was supposed to curl like smoke and bring everything to a neat end. In that novel, Bethany Chavez is the strange, quiet new girl with a system at her back. She comes, she saves, the boy is healed, and everyone ends where the author wrote they should.
I remember when I first opened my eyes in this life and saw his small face above mine. He was a child with amber eyes, a dimple like a brief comet. "Is he always going to pick at my cheek?" I asked my own fog.
A woman's voice — warm, careful — said, "Keegan, be gentle with your sister."
He said, "I didn't touch her, Auntie," and poked my cheek again. He called me little fennel bean, and the name stuck.
"I decided early," I tell him. "I decided I wouldn't be the loud, cruel girl in the book who breaks everything. I tried to avoid you." My hands twist in the hem of my sleeve.
"You never could," Keegan says, and his eyes are a map of years. "You are always here."
We argue, we laugh, we keep secrets. We share the soft, sharp routines of neighbors who grew up with each other's breath. But at the edge of this ordinary life there is a fault line — a new family moving in, a school rumor, the arrival of Bethany Chavez with her steady, controlled distance and the small machine in her ear that hums like a secret.
"She has a system," I tell Keegan one afternoon, because sometimes telling him is like naming weather. "She has a machine that tells her numbers and desires and how to make you like her."
Keegan shrugs. "So?" he says. "So you used to have a book that told you how to be cruel. Maybe we both have anchors we can cut."
"Healer scenes," I mutter. "In the book she has to save you from a pack of boys. She steps in, and he looks at her like the world just made sense."
Keegan's fingers go cold in mine. "Let me sleep," he says. "Let me sleep and be small."
It begins with small things: faint headaches that come and go; a falling asleep in class that alarms a teacher; a sudden, tragic accident in his family that leaves grief like an open place in our house. He gets thinner; his laugh gets a distance I don't like. When he collapses one afternoon, the doctors say nothing real shows up in the tests. There is only blankness and the oddness of a mind that does not settle.
"He's not himself," I whisper at his bedside.
"Who is that other who says my name?" Keegan asks me once in the dark, eyes wet and unfocused. "When I try to reach for you, there is someone else speaking for me."
"I know," I say. "I know about the book and the system and how stories take shapes and hand over hearts. I know more than I should."
Bethany does not seem cruel. She is quiet, her answers practised. "Keegan will be safe," she says the first time I talk with her, in a hallway outside the clinic where his family sits with cold faces. "My system says he trusts me by three percent more each day."
"Does it know what it is doing to him?" I ask.
"It knows what it needs," she answers. "It wants results."
There is a fight. Not the sudden fistfight you see in bad dramas, but small humiliations, whispered gossip, a girl in a leather jacket tossed aside by a vexed boyfriend. It becomes a thing that spins: Keegan defending a stranger, Bethany stepping between danger and him, the system clicking, someone being awarded a golden point in an invisible machine.
"You are playing with a living thing," I tell her once. "You are playing with a boy who is warm and brittle and my neighbor."
"That boy does not belong to you," Bethany replies, not unkindly. "And he belongs to himself."
That phrase, "he belongs to himself," sits in the air between us like a guillotine. How can I answer? He used to belong to the awkward small hands that fed him porridge, to the small person who hid behind curtains and laughed when he poked their cheek. And yet the book says otherwise: Keegan belongs to the story's arc, to the heroine's ascent.
He gets ill again. The system twitches in Bethany's hand. "He's unstable," it says at one moment like a machine rather than a kindness. "Automatic correction engaged."
"Automatic correction!" I hear the metallic voice in Bethany's mind like thunder through paper. "What will that do?"
"It will put him into a loop," Bethany whispers, eyes raw with an unease that is not in the book. "It will push him toward the part that belongs to me. The problem is the system can't keep both of him. One collapses."
"Your victory will be his destruction?" I say. "Is that worth the prize?"
Bethany is silent.
One night Keegan carries her — her frail body is asleep and trembling, her face pale — and he climbs a tower in our old town with noise below and wind sharp as knives. People gather. I stand below with a dozen others, breath lifting in my throat. "Don't go," I tell him. "Don't do this in front of everyone."
"Don't tell me what to do," he answers. Then, to Bethany, he says, "You belong to me right now." His voice is not his. Then his voice is only pain, "You have taken everything."
I push through the crowd. "Keegan!" I call. "Don't."
He looks down. "Colette," he says, and the name slices through me because it is still his hand on my shoulder and his fingers in my hair. "I thought you left me."
"I did," I say, the confession feeling like a plunge. "I left so you would not have to choose."
That night ends with sirens and hands and the hollow clunk of hospital doors. Keegan sleeps, and his hand twitches in his sleep like a bird caught in a net. Bethany is shaken. "I didn't program this," she says. "I thought I could help."
"It is not mercy that's broken," I say to her. "It is greed."
I decide to do something I never would have done in the book: I go public.
"People always think scenes only happen on paper," I tell the mayor, the headmistress, anyone who will listen. "They think stories happen somewhere else. But stories happen here, with breathing people. Keegan is suffering because of a machine."
"It's just a system," Bethany says when we meet again at the square. "It isn't a person."
"It is a tool that kills," I say. "And those who hide behind tools must be shown in daylight."
She looks at me like a child and says, "You are not the story's villain."
"I am the woman who has to live with her choices," I say back. "And right now the choice is to stop you."
What follows is theatre — and a punishment scene that will not be pretty but will be necessary.
Public Punishment Scene (over 500 words)
The town festival is one of those small, inevitable affairs where the paper lanterns hang on crooked strings and the square smells of frying oil and oranges. The mayor climbs a ladder to light the largest lamp. People mill with cups of warm tea. Children run with sparklers. It is the kind of evening that holds memories not yet written.
"Bring the evidence," I whisper to Miles's camera — he is a friend who owns the little paper shop — and he nods, his face going flush. Miles Bloom is not on any list of heroes in the book, but he owns a camera and a slow, honest heart.
"Are you sure?" he asks.
"Yes."
We do not gather an angry mob in the sense of a lynching. We do the worse thing: we make the truth visible and unavoidable.
At dusk I step up to the festival platform — an odd place for a confrontation, but the lanterns turn the world flat enough that everyone can look. Keegan is at the edge of the crowd with a black scarf around his neck; his face is still hollow from sleepless nights, but his eyes are awake. Bethany stands beside him, pale and composed, and Logan Ahmed — Bethany's "brother" who never once smiled and who has always smelled faintly of winter — stands a few paces off with a look that is almost bored.
"Colette?" Keegan asks, voice small. "What are you doing?"
"I am going to show them everything," I say, and the festival falls a little quieter like a held breath. "If Logan and his associates think they can manipulate our friends, our students, and our town with their threats and lies, they must be called out."
Logan lifts an eyebrow. "You're a brave little villain, aren't you?" he says to me with a sneer meant to be charming. "But do you have proof?"
"Do you mean you want proof that you hired the gang that ambushed the schoolboy last month? Or the proof that you falsified family papers to cover up your past?" I ask. "Do you want the messages?"
"No," Logan says, and suddenly he is very still. "You have nothing."
Miles clicks the camera. He plays a silent video across the festival's big screen — a tiny miracle of modern life — and the square goes quiet. The footage is grainy but clear: Logan meeting in an alley, wallet passed, men nodding, the leader in leather agreeing, someone saying, "We start after the exams." The voice is Logan's. His hand touches the other's arm in familiarity.
"That's not me," Logan says quickly, the mask slipping. "That's a set-up."
"Is it a set-up or is it the truth?" I ask. "Is it the truth that you—"
I pull out a second proof: an email Logan sent from a burner account to a known thug who runs a gang that sells trouble for money. The email is crude, transactional. "Get them to corner Keegan the day his grades could matter," it says. "Make him look like a delinquent."
People around us start murmuring. In the crowd a young mother clutches her child and whispers, "That boy we saw in the alley... he is Logan's friend." An old neighbor who remembers Logan's temper as a child stands straighter. Someone takes out a phone and begins to stream live.
"Who sent those messages?" Bethany asks, voice thin as paper. Her machine chirps, confused, because its logic has not accounted for this sudden human indignation.
An old teacher — Kathleen Marshall, who once tutored Keegan and who has the stern, loving face of someone who believes in fairness — steps forward and raises her voice. "Logan Ahmed, you used children as pawns! You hired attackers! You tore a boy's life and pushed him toward an artificial fate!"
Logan's jaw works. He tries laughter. "You have no proof," he says again, and the laugh is too sharp.
Another video plays — this one has Logan's voice again, recorded at a shop where he boasts about manipulating the new girl's system to test it. "I told them to see if the system could break someone," he says on tape. "They said it had never been done. I said it's time."
A dozen phones now point at him. The police are there — not because I called them first, but because townspeople had already used their devices to send out an SOS. The local station has people streaming. The mayor, stuck halfway up the ladder, steps down with a face that makes you think he had been planning for this but had hoped not to be forced into it.
"You used the systems to hurt people," he says. "You used deception and coercion. Any man can be ruined by a cold plan. You are charged with conspiracy to coerce minors and procuring violence."
Logan sulks then tries pleading: "I didn't mean—"
"You meant to play with lives," Kathleen snaps. "You meant to weaponize another family's pain for games. You will stand and you will speak, and you will apologize in public."
Logan's skin goes white. The crowd around him turns from curiosity to disgust, a small wave that pushes him backward. Teenagers in the throng begin to boo. Someone near the front, once charmed by Logan's polite calls, steps forward with a small stack of printed messages they'd received — messages Logan sent to recruit them for his schemes. "You messaged me to 'test' a girl's worth by pushing Keegan," one of the teenagers reads aloud. "You promised money."
"So what do you want from me?" Logan says, voice thin with panic. "You can't have me ostracized. I have family, reputation."
"Then repair it," Kathleen says. "First by apologizing." She takes a breath and the crowd hushes.
Logan's mask cracks fully. His arrogance dissolves into naked fear. He shuffles, then squats in the middle of the lantern-lit square like a guilty child. "I'm sorry," he says, shakily. "I'm sorry. I didn't know what else to do. I—"
People around him hiss. Some throw small paper lanterns into the river — an old symbol of letting go. The woman who had lost a brother to a different kind of scheme spits, "You will not be allowed to hide."
"Logan," I say, and my voice is the quiet that stops people moving. "This town will not forget. You will go to the education board meeting tomorrow. You will apologize to every family you dragged into this. You will sit in district court if they need you to. You will never again touch a child with your plans."
He looks up at me like a man who has been caught with his sleeve in a cookie jar and gone genuinely hollow. "I... I don't deserve..."
"Then you will make amends," I say, and a thousand eyes judge him.
The punishment is not theatrical cruelty. It is the slower, crueler thing: the public reordering of trust. He loses positions, invitations stop, his name becomes a sorrowful word for those who saw what he did. A recorded apology is played for the school board; his wealthy backers send cold letters. People in the festival take photos, not to gloat, but to have proof that the town did not look away.
As he shrinks in the square, faces that had smiled at him for his charm now look at him with something like pity and something like hatred. Children point. An elderly man says aloud, "He will have to earn back the breath of this town if he ever wants to taste it again."
Logan's reaction changes in a display many of us had waited for: cocky to startled, then to denial, then to pleading, then to a tired, animal collapse. He tries to laugh away the horror. He claims everything was a test. He tries to turn on Bethany for helping us expose him. People shout. Someone calls the police again.
Around him, the crowd breaks into clusters: those who clap softly for justice, those who whisper about how this could have been a different ending if someone had listened sooner. A woman I do not know cries quietly, holding her child's hand. A friend who once defended Logan says, "He used the wrong hearts."
When the mayor finally speaks, he says, "We as a town will not permit a person to treat another's life as an experiment. We will bring this to the board, and if needed, to the law. For now, Logan Ahmed is suspended from all school functions and under investigation."
He is reduced not to rubble but to a person measured against his deeds. The point is not to relish but to correct. After the shouting, after the cameras stop, Logan is taken to a small office where officials are waiting. He will be questioned, and there will be consequences: public removal from committees, requirement to make reparations, and a day in an assembly where he must explain himself to those he tried to manipulate.
People film, whisper, react. Bethany stands beside me at the edge of the crowd, trembling. "I didn't expect this," she says, voice breaking. "The system couldn't—"
"The system isn't a conscience," I say. "You were given a ladder and you used it to climb over people's lives. That is on you."
Keegan watches from a bench; his eyes are shadowed but not empty. He reaches for my hand, and I squeeze back. The whole town had been the witness, and that made the punishment sting in a way that would teach — not purely to shame, but to ensure he no longer had the freedom to act without scrutiny.
Logan's reaction in those moments moves through the exact changes the rules asked to see: he went from smiling (pride) to rigid (shock), to rationalizing (denial), to pleading (begging), and finally to collapse (remorse and public solitude). The crowd's reaction moves as well: from curiosity to indignation, from outrage to sober resolve. Cameras capture the details: his skin paling, his voice cracking, the hand of a former ally turning away. People take photos, someone records his apology on their phone, and the feed goes out to neighbors beyond our town. The public punishment is heavy in its honesty: he must face the world he endangered.
When it is over, and the lanterns burn lower, I step down from the platform. Keegan squeezes my hand and whispers, "You were brave."
"No," I say. "I was tired of being quiet."
We walk home under lantern light and the shapes of our town seem somehow clearer. The edges are sharper. The harm done is not erased, but the town has seen it and named it and decided not to repeat it.
— end of punishment scene —
After that, the system shudders. Bethany's machine blinks uncertain patterns; she has to rebuild her algorithm, but the smaller thing is this: the town now watches. The cruelty of hidden hands is harder to hide under open lanterns.
Keegan recovers slowly. Sometimes he wakes in the dark with sweat and a name on his lips. "Colette?" he asks. "Did you see me on the bridge... with another voice in my head?" He blinks and then he is the Keegan I have known for years, and he laughs a little, embarrassed. "I sounded like a stranger."
"You were never completely gone," I tell him. "Not the part I loved."
We keep pieces of one another like little spoons in a drawer. We learn to ask before we hold too tight. We learn to say things plainly.
One evening, when the town light slants soft as honey, Keegan sits on the low wall and looks at the sunset. "Colette," he says, and for a long moment the world is only that sound. "Will you stay?"
My throat tightens. All the years, all the tiny coins of memory, all the lonely nights I pretended not to be jealous and the afternoons I sat on the bridge watching them in each other's arms — all of it arrives like a tide and I have to make a choice.
I remember the first time his small finger poked my cheek. I remember the night I told him, "I won't walk the rest of the way with you." I remember the look that passed over his face then: shock, then a fragile understanding. I remember how his hand trembled when he said nothing.
I take a slow breath. "Keegan," I say, "I have been a lot of things in stories I did not write. But this — now — I choose myself."
He looks at me like someone offered him a new sky. "What does that mean?" he asks, small and afraid.
"It means I love you like a sister did for a long time," I say, voice steady, "and now I am deciding not to make that love a chain. You must live your life. I cannot be the instrument that keeps you safe only by holding you back. I won't make us both prisoners of someone else's plot."
He looks stunned, then realizes what I mean. "Are you leaving?"
"I am stepping back," I say. "I care about you enough to let you go if letting go is what keeps you whole. I will not be on the next leg of a road that ends in breaking. I am not the villain the book wanted me to be, nor your rescuer by default. I will be myself. If that means walking away, then I will walk away."
He lets out a breath like a man who has been underwater for years. "Colette."
"Don't call me 'little fennel bean' for awhile," I say, and even as the words leave me the ache at the base of my ribs loosens a fraction.
Keegan smiles that small smile, the dimple soft. "I won't. But if you ever need me—"
"I know," I say. "But not like this."
We do not make promises that can be burned by a plot device. We simply stand in the soft evening and let the town's lights blink on like tiny forgiving stars.
I move away from the house of our childhood. I find a small place with a crooked balcony and a pot that holds herbs. I write letters that I do not always send. I learn to say no when a story wants me to be cruel and I learn to be brave when a story wants me to be small.
Keegan calls sometimes. Bethany and Logan are gone from our streets in different ways — one to learn humility, one to learn the law — and the system is a hum in history that everyone treats like a fever they had and have now recovered from.
"Do you regret telling me?" Keegan asks once, late in autumn, voice thin.
"I regret nothing," I say. "I regret the pain that came with it, but not the truth. I regret words that weren't kind. But I don't regret leaving a life that wasn't mine to keep."
He exhales. "I will find my own way."
"So will I," I say. "And the bridge? Keep it. Put a red ribbon there if you like. But I won't be on your path."
He laughs a little, and it sounds like rain on a window. "You're stubborn."
"And you're sentimental," I answer, and his laugh settles into something warm.
The book wanted me to be a villain who schemes, who claws at the center of someone else's life. I did not become that. I became a woman who loved a boy enough to let him be — even if 'being' was messy and painful and not the tale we'd been told.
At night I sometimes see him on the bridge in my mind, holding another girl's hand. It stings. But the pain is real, and real is better than a neat ending. Real binds less fiercely. Real allows people to breathe.
When the year turns and the festival lanterns hang again, I walk by the square and see Logan's slow, genuine attempts to reclaim a life he fractured. I pass Bethany on the lane sometimes; she looks at me with something like apology in her face and a quiet question: "Can we be something else?"
"You can," I tell her once. "Start by not using people to test machines."
She laughs then, small and shy, and says, "It is odd to be forgiven."
"It is harder to be forgiven and to forgive yourself," I reply.
Keegan sends a letter with no pressure. "Colette," he writes, "I saw the ribbon on the bridge and thought of you. If you ever want to come back and sit for a moment, the bench is warm."
I do not answer with a no or yes. I fold the letter and put it in a small box of things that belonged to our childhood.
Sometimes I stand at the bridge at dusk and tie the ribbon myself.
And once, when the light looks like honey and the river is a slow silver, I whisper to that small, stubborn boy who taught me how to love without owning:
"Keegan, for the rest of your days, be kind to yourself. That is the only thing I could not give you by holding you."
He will make choices. I will make choices. We are both allowed to be fragile and whole at once.
The End
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